Dark Water - Laura McNeal [1]
The houses are far apart when you’re out in the hills, where trees and petunias grow in straight lines for profit, but once you get close to town, the streets look like something drawn by a child with an Etch A Sketch. No overall plan, no sidewalks, just driveways going off in crazy lines that lead to other driveways, where signs point to other dead-end streets named in Spanish or English with no particular theme—La Oreja Place sticking out of Rodeo Queen Drive leading to Tecolote Avenue, which if it were a sentence would read “the Ear on the Rodeo Queen of the Owl.”
The ear and the queen and the owl are overrun with bougainvillea, ivy geraniums, tulip vines, and star jasmine, and that’s what makes Fallbrook beautiful from a distance but tangled and confusing up close. It’s a place where you can get lost no matter how long you’ve lived here, and there are only two roads out, something we didn’t think much about before the fires began.
Three
I first saw Amiel de la Cruz Guerrero on the corner of one of those Etch A Sketch streets, where Alvarado meets Stage Coach. I was fifteen and he was seventeen, although he told employers he was twenty. I was in my sophomore year of high school and my mother was substitute-teaching because my father had left us, and as my mother was constantly saying over the phone when she thought I wasn’t listening, The wolf is at the door.
Every weekday morning at seven-thirty we’d leave my uncle’s avocado ranch, where we were living free of rent (but not shame) in the guesthouse. My mother would drink her coffee in the car while she drove, and I would eat dry Corn Pops from a Tupperware bowl. Traffic would bunch up as all the cars going to all the schools had to inch through the same four-way stop at Alvarado and Stage Coach, one corner of which was a day-labor gathering site, meaning Mexican and Guatemalan men would stand around on the empty lot hoping to get a day’s work digging trenches, moving furniture, hauling firewood, or picking fruit. The men stared intensely into every car, hoping to win you over before you stopped. Pick me, their faces said. The wolf is at the door.
But on this morning, the men had their backs to the road. Our car rolled slowly to the stop sign, going even slower than usual because the drivers of the cars were staring, too.
When we got close enough, I could see a lanky guy in a flannel shirt and work pants doing some sort of act. Fallbrook calls itself the Avocado Capital of the World, so you don’t live here without seeing guys pick avocados. Mostly it’s done on high ladders, but there’s also this funky tool like a lacrosse stick with a six-foot handle. You stick the pole way up in the tree, hook the avocado, yank, then lower the pole so you can drop the fruit into a huge canvas bag you’re wearing slung over one shoulder and across your chest. That’s what Amiel was doing that morning, only without the pole, the sack, the tree, or the avocado.
“What in the world?” my mom asked.
“He’s picking imaginary fruit,” I said.
She snuck a look. “That’s the oddest thing I’ve ever seen.”
“Can we hire him?”
She snorted. It was our turn to dart through the intersection just as Amiel de la Cruz Guerrero touched his imaginary avocado-picking pole to a live electrical wire and received an imaginary jolt, which made all the day-labor guys laugh.
Four
The next day, he was juggling three actual, not mimed, soda bottles. “Look, Mom,” I said, so she peered over for a second.
“I hope he doesn’t litter,” she said.
“That sounded kind of racist.”
“There’s no trash can on this corner, if you haven’t noticed. And the neighbors will make a stink if junk starts piling up.”
The day after that, Amiel was standing on his head. While I watched, the guy next to him gave his feet a shove and he tipped over. “I guess