Heavy Water_ And Other Stories - Martin Amis [7]
“And as for my fellow artisan in the scrivener’s trade: Alistair. What will you have?”
At once Sixsmith showed himself to be a person of some candor. Or it might have been that he saw in the younger screenplay writer someone before whom all false reticence could be cast aside. Sixsmith’s estranged second wife, it emerged, herself the daughter of two alcoholics, was an alcoholic. Her current lover (ah, how these lovers came and went!) was an alcoholic. To complicate matters, Sixsmith explained as he rattled his glass at the waiter, his daughter, the product of his first marriage, was an alcoholic. How did Sixsmith keep going? Despite his years, he had, thank God, found love, in the arms of a woman young enough (and, by the sound of it, alcoholic enough) to be his daughter. Their prawn cocktails arrived, together with a carafe of hearty red wine. Sixsmith lit a cigarette and held up his palm toward Alistair for the duration of a coughing fit that turned every head in the room. Then, for a moment, understandably disoriented, he stared at Alistair as if uncertain of his intentions, or even his identity. But their bond quickly re-established itself. Soon they were talking away like hardened equals—of Trumbo, of Chayevsky, of Towne, of Eszterhas.
Around two thirty, when, after several attempts, the waiter succeeded in removing Sixsmith’s untouched prawn cocktail, and now prepared to serve them their braised chops with a third carafe, the two men were arguing loudly about early Puzo.
Joe yawned and shrugged and said languidly, “You know something? I was never that crazy about the Petrarchan rhyme scheme anyway.”
Jan said, “ ‘Composed at—Castle’ is ABBA ABBA.”
Jen said, “So was ‘’Tis.’ Right up until the final polish.”
Jon said, “Here’s some news. They say ‘Composed at—Castle’ is in turnaround.”
“You’re not serious,” said Bo. “It’s released this month. I heard they were getting great preview reaction.”
Joe looked doubtful. “ ‘ ’Tis’ has made the suits kind of antsy about sonnets. They figure lightning can’t strike twice.”
“ABBA ABBA,” said Bo with distaste.
“Or,” said Joe. “Or … or we go unrhymed.”
“Unrhymed?” said Phil.
“We go blank,” said Joe.
There was a silence. Bill looked at Gil, who looked at Will.
“What do you think, Luke?” said Jim. “You’re the poet.”
Luke had never felt very protective about “Sonnet.” Even its original version he had regarded as little more than a bargaining chip. Nowadays he rewrote “Sonnet” every night at the Pinnacle Trumont before Henna arrived and they started torturing room service. “Blank,” said Luke. “Blank. I don’t know, Joe. I could go ABAB ABAB or even ABAB CDCD. Christ, I’d go AABB if I didn’t think it’d tank the final couplet. But blank. I never thought I’d go blank.”
“Well, it needs something,” said Joe.
“Maybe it’s the pentameter,” said Luke. “Maybe it’s the iamb. Hey, here’s one from left field. How about syllabics?”
At five forty-five Hugh Sixsmith ordered a gin and tonic and said, “We’ve talked. We’ve broken bread. Wine. Truth. Screenplay-writing. I want to talk about your work, Alistair. Yes, I do. I want to talk about Offensive from Quasar 13.”
Alistair blushed.
“It’s not often that … But one always knows. That sense of pregnant arrest. Of felt life in its full … Thank you, Alistair. Thank you, I have to say that it rather reminded me of my own early work.”
Alistair nodded.
Having talked for quite some time about his own maturation as a screenplay writer, Sixsmith said, “Now. Just tell me to shut up any time you like. And I’m going to print it anyway. But I want to make one tiny suggestion about Offensive from Quasar 13.”
Alistair waved a hand in the air.
“Now,” said Sixsmith. He broke off and ordered a prawn cocktail. The waiter looked at him defeatedly. “Now,” said Sixsmith. “When Brad escapes from the Nebulan experiment lab and sets off with Cord and Tara to