Writing Analytically, 6th Edition - Rosenwasser, David & Stephen, Jill [178]
Strategy 3: Supply Ongoing Analysis of Sources (Don’t Wait Until the End)
Unless disciplinary conventions dictate otherwise, analyze as you quote or paraphrase a source, rather than summarizing everything first and leaving your analysis for the end. A good conversation does not consist of long monologues alternating among the speakers. Participants exchange views, query, and modify what other speakers have said. Similarly, when you orchestrate conversations with and among your sources, you need to integrate your analysis into your presentation of them.
In supplying ongoing analysis, you are much more likely to explain how the information in the sources fits into your unfolding presentation, and your readers will be more likely to follow your train of thought and grasp the logic of your organization. You will also prevent yourself from using the sources simply as an answer. A good rule of thumb in this regard is to force yourself to ask and answer “So what?” at the ends of paragraphs. In laying out your analysis, however, take special care to distinguish your voice from the sources’.
Bringing Sources Together: A Psychology Professor Speaks
In the following Voice from Across the Curriculum, psychology professor Alan Tjeltveit offers a tip about how members of his discipline orchestrate a number of sources on more than one topic.
Voices from Across the Curriculum
Avoid serial citation summaries; that is, rather than discussing what Author A found, then what Author B found, then what Author C found, and so forth, integrate material from all of your sources. For instance, if writing about the cause and treatment of a disorder, discuss what all authors say about cause, then what all authors say about treatment, and so forth, addressing any contradictions or tensions among authors.
—Alan Tjeltveit, Professor of Psychology
Strategy 4: Use Your Sources to Ask Questions, Not Just To Provide Answers
Use your selections from sources as a means of raising issues and questions. Avoid the temptation to plug in such selections as answers that require no further commentary or elaboration. You will no doubt find viewpoints you believe to be valid, but it is not enough to drop these answers from the source into your own writing at the appropriate spots. You need to do something with the reading, even with those sources that seem to have said what you want to say.
As long as you consider only the source in isolation, you may not discover much to say about it. Once you begin considering it in other contexts and with other sources, you may begin to see aspects of your subject that your source does not adequately address. Having recognized that the source does not answer all questions, you should not conclude that the source is “wrong”—only that it is limited in some ways. Discovering such limitations is in fact advantageous because it can lead you to identify a place from which to launch your own analysis.
It does not necessarily follow that your analysis will culminate in an answer to replace those offered by your